Angel of Death

Hey Ash! I was so happy when you PMed me and told me that you posted the 13th chapter! Okay, time to start reading. It was as though I had ...

Thanks Hannah! I agree with you on The Tale of Lady Greensleeves and Lord Death. It really isn't a poem but the idea woke me up out of my sleep, ...

My favorite princess would have to be Princess Jasmine. I really like all of them but I loved that movie! ~Angel

April 8 the dissection of hearts They send love me-love me not flowers to each other and on good days their love is flying like doves on a lavender morning. ...

Seriously, this made me cry. I knew you be able to finish this. And can you see the tears fall down my face, because who is to say the world ...

April 7 90% Dead Inside It's been a long time since the dawn broke through the night. With straws for legs and a handful of coal for a heart, he ...

April 6 i just called to say... There isn't a word in the world that I can say to voice the thoughts in my head. Love is only a four-lettered ...

Hey Cal, I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while. First off, lovely title. The hardest part, they said, was getting through the front door—which Martha found laughable because ...

Thanks so much Cal! This review was so helpful. Hehe, I type really fast and I must have forget to put the E in Mickey. I was hoping my dialogue ...

June! Your first poem is simply breathtaking. The rhyming was executed beautifully. Keep writing, ~Angel

Note: Okay, this was originally a short story it still is but I'm breaking this up into parts. As I was writing this, I was kinda worried about style and ...

Hey Yo-yo! I haven't read anything of yours in a while. But really, I could relate to this so subject-wise this was a great read. We do get lonely, and ...

Hey Ky! Thanks for the heads up! Where where the kids? It should be "Where were the kids?" The teased trapeze of his thoughts. The gun in his side – ...

These are all really good. I am especially in love with these lines My bare feet on the concrete. I shiver at the cold hard touch, these sidewalks know no ...

Well, to answer you question about internal thoughts. I don't your character should think like that all the time. She should scrutinize or criticize the other girl in her mind. ...